Where have all the editors gone....

[dcseain]

I have edted the Opening Words i requseted editing help with. Strikthrough text has been deeted, and italicized text has been added. Updated doc is here in this post. Thank you all for your input to date.

Comments

[nancylebov.livejournal.com]

I wasn't sure if you wanted more editing, but I saw a couple of possibilities that I've added to he main post.

[dcseain.livejournal.com]

Thank you. That's exactly what i was hoping for.

[nosebeepbear.livejournal.com]

I'll try to make time to take a look.

[dcseain.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I'm writing it to read aloud. If it reads well as well, bonus. :)

[nosebeepbear.livejournal.com]

By the way, I *adore* this post. If it was an accident, ignore me :P.

[dcseain.livejournal.com]

ROFL. I'd not noticed the apropos typos. I've decided to leave them as they were mistyped.

[nosebeepbear.livejournal.com]

I thought it was very clever of you, but deciding to keep the happy accident makes me almost as happy :).