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Flow & Semantics Editing HELP Please
Oct. 24th, 2005 04:50 pmI'm polishing my opening words for this year's Samhain service, the theme of which is
Each of you was a huge help in finding the right words. Now i need help putting them in the right order.
( Here's the text, with paragraphs numbered, but how to order it? )
As i see it, paragraphs, 1, 2,3, & 7 logically go together, as do paragraphs 4,5, &6. I need transition between them. I'm thinking i'd like to make it flow 4, 5, 6, 1, 2, 3, 7 if possible. HELP!
Sailing the Sunless Sea, with a leitmotif of breath/breathing.
Each of you was a huge help in finding the right words. Now i need help putting them in the right order.
( Here's the text, with paragraphs numbered, but how to order it? )
As i see it, paragraphs, 1, 2,3, & 7 logically go together, as do paragraphs 4,5, &6. I need transition between them. I'm thinking i'd like to make it flow 4, 5, 6, 1, 2, 3, 7 if possible. HELP!
