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It's that time of year again. I'm writing an opening for a ritual at my church. First italic bit is for emphasis, the second as a placeholder. Thank you in advance for your input.
( And here's draft 0 of the opening )
What is the sun, but of Fire; purifying, bleaching. What are the summer winds, but of Fire; eroding, transforming. What is passion, but of Fire; unbridled, transfiguring…
Fire in the core of the Earth ( and there's more... )smudged.
We come from the mountain living in the mountain
Go back to the mountain, turn the world around
We come from the fire living in the fire
Go back to the fire, turn the world around
repeat!
( And here's draft 0 of the opening )
What is the sun, but of Fire; purifying, bleaching. What are the summer winds, but of Fire; eroding, transforming. What is passion, but of Fire; unbridled, transfiguring…
Fire in the core of the Earth ( and there's more... )smudged.
We come from the mountain living in the mountain
Go back to the mountain, turn the world around
We come from the fire living in the fire
Go back to the fire, turn the world around
repeat!
