I started this, but have no clue how to conclude it. HELP! I don't care if you know what Samhain is, i just need input. THANKS!

EDIT: I think i'm going to keep working on this one beyond the Samhain Service, and polish into what i know it can be. So, input on it as a zero-draft poem are most welcome.


EDIT the Second: Some suggestons from mergyeugnau, delivered via IM, have been incorporated, hence the strikthroughs.

( The poem that is to be the opening for the Sahmain service on Sunday next )