Go Me!

I'm doing some translation on a contract basis for a friend's company - Enlish to Spanish. Today was the first day of the seminar in which my transations were being used. The delegates, from México, complemented the translation. This is a big happy, as not only is this my first professional translation work, but it was on topics about which i knew little going in, as graviometers, gradiometers, and mGals are not things i deal with usually. It all made much more sense once i learned what all those things are.

HELP! How do i end this

I started this, but have no clue how to conclude it. HELP! I don't care if you know what Samhain is, i just need input. THANKS!

EDIT: I think i'm going to keep working on this one beyond the Samhain Service, and polish into what i know it can be. So, input on it as a zero-draft poem are most welcome.


EDIT the Second: Some suggestons from mergyeugnau, delivered via IM, have been incorporated, hence the strikthroughs.

( The poem that is to be the opening for the Sahmain service on Sunday next )