ext_3072 (
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2005-10-24 09:35 pm (UTC)
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I like the order you've got, except that I'd put 7 at the beginning as well as at the end.
It may need another paragraph between 6 and 1 to make the transition between the literal/liminal beach and the sea of tears.
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It may need another paragraph between 6 and 1 to make the transition between the literal/liminal beach and the sea of tears.