Samhain Ritual 2006
The 3rd annual UUCSS Samhain Ritual went off beautifully on yesterday mornung. Thanks to all who have given me feedback on the poem, and special thanks to ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
dr_tectonic and mergyeugnau for their feedback. Swapping those two stanzas was brilliant, Beemer! Greatly improved the flow - that really should have been obvious to me.
I look forward to shaping Summer's End further, transforming it into what i believe it can be, though i'm content with what i ended up with for use at the ritual, seeing as i composed the initial draft on Tuesday last.
dr_tectonic and mergyeugnau for their feedback. Swapping those two stanzas was brilliant, Beemer! Greatly improved the flow - that really should have been obvious to me.I look forward to shaping Summer's End further, transforming it into what i believe it can be, though i'm content with what i ended up with for use at the ritual, seeing as i composed the initial draft on Tuesday last.